Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Introducing the crime

EXT. POULTRY PLANT - DAY

In the sea of identical boxy warehouses, a boxy truck reads,
"Sunshine Poultry."

Lung's black SUV parks by the truck.



INT. POULTRY PLANT

SQUACK SQUACK!

Chicken cages line the floor. Chicken blood and feces cover
workers.

Other workers cover their faces with masks and their own
hands.

Lung enters through a door. He appears unaffected by the
stench and the sound.

Lung's fancy Italian shoes stomp through chicken feathers
covering the floor.

Workers clear out in front of Lung.

Lung opens a heavy metal door and enters...

THE FREEZER

Buckets of what must be chicken guts, boxes of chicken, and
blood splattered cases fill a walk-in freezer.

Lung moves a bloody box on a bloody shelf, revealing a
camera.

The WHIRR of machinery rumbles as a wall slides open into
a...

RECEPTION OFFICE

A heavy steel piston moves a thick steel door. This could
probably stop a missle.

White fog pours from around the door.

Lung strides through the door and into the office.

Waiting in the office are a number of intimidated looking
workers and...

CHAVEZ

30s, a weaselly Latino.

CHAVEZ
Bossman! So, nice to see you.

No one looks like they're feeling nice.

Lung is expressionless.

CHAVEZ
Come with me, I have so much to
show you.

NURSERY

Irrigation pipes drip water into hundreds of buckets lined
into rows. Each bucket contains a small, green plant.
Florescent bulbs shower the plants with light.

CHAVEZ
As you can see, our facility is
quite a success. 24 hour sun,
climate control.

Lung stops and looks at a thermometer on the wall.

The thermometer reads 88 degrees.

Chavez leads Lung past ventilation pipes.

Buckets now contain 3 foot tall marijuana plants.

CHAVEZ
Crops grow at an impressive rate.
After 60 days, we can harvest.

Lung and Chavez now stand in a jungle of a room filled with 7
foot tall plants.

CHAVEZ
As you can see, we're doing a good
job.

Chavez cracks a smile.

Lung walks towards a door. Over his shoulder, Lung motions
"follow me" with a single finger.

Lung opens the door and enters.

Chavez follows.

CHAVEZ
If you have any questions, I can
answer them, or suggestions, or
anything of that matter.

The door closes behind Chavez.

POW!

Lung's fist drops Chavez to the concrete floor.

LUNG
What the fuck do you think you're
doing?

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